Fall Convocation Piece-Review

Convocation Fall Piece

This piece resulted from a speech about a first hand experience during 9/11. I feel a great sense of peace and balance through this piece, which reflects some themes from the presenter. Although very organic, geometry keeps its form in order. Often times, I look at old work and just feel that something is missing. I may revisit this print sometime in the future an repost and update.

To help with this idea of how you know something is missing, I’ll explain my feeling more in depth. Upon review of this composition, I feel that it is significantly heavy in the top left portion, I wonder if I should have done more with the open shapes on the mid left or the right half, and it just seems as if there is a spark missing. Maybe one element should be added. I am not sure.

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Author: caylajones

I am an artist and writer who aspires to change the world. Here you'll find custom pieces and blog posts about life.

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